(IELTS Num1.) Essay By Sung Ho Moon

　　1、Some young children spend a great amount of their time practicing sports.      Discuss the advantages of this. use specific reasons

 

 

 

    Sports have a long history, born since the beginning of mankind. For human, sports have various signification. For some, it can be a tool of entertainment, enabling them to enjoy leisure time with their buddies. Challenging their own limit is also another trait of sports. 

   Born to be a sports fanatic, I could not help but to brag all those advantages sports have when young. Vital it is to form a healthy ego at the beginning of one social relationships ; enjoying sports is the key to it. Foremost of all, playing any kinds of sports will help people to get to know each other. The thrill of a social relationship all begins with an awkward moment when introducing each other. Sports can be the stepping stone for that procedure. I remember my first day at school. I had no friends, since I moved to Yongtong after living in the States. How afraid I was after encountering all those  unfamiliar obstructions. I was very shy and timid. Needless to say, I had no friends to talk with till PE class. Luckily, I was a great fan of soccer. After boasting my skills, classmates acknolweged my talent which helped my gain confidence icebreaking the relationship with them.

    Moreover, sports is imperative for students to keep in good health. All high school students suffer from lack of stamina, especiall when they are in 12th grade, right before taking the University Admittance Test. Most of students endure the insufficiency through taking pills prescribed by the pharmacy which, in my opinion, is an absurd way. Medicine have its own dermerit: tolerance. Soon, students taking pill would have to eat more pills to supplement health; consequently, making them more dependent to it. Sports, however, have no dependency. Also it helps them to keep fit. As aforementioned, I am a big fan of sports. So, I never felt the necessity of pills even at the brink of the big test. I still believe the capability to study without pills attributed to my love for sports.

     To reiterate, enjoying sports young is advantageous in making social ties and to stay fit.

 

 

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